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Conrad Rice

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Water Elves ~ Chapter 1

    Hi VulpixLover. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer. So, you seem like you are off to an all right start in terms of the over all story. In ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Life As A Two-Finned Freak *Still thinking of a better name*

    Hi there Kayla. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer. So, this has an interesting premise. I'll admit it has been done before, but don't let that stop you ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Cat Steps [1] DRAFT

    So, finally, I work my way around to this. Sorry it took so long. So, you're off to a good start. As far as I'm concerned, I think that you're ...

    Dec 29, 2009
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Parking as many cars as possible

    Hi there! Been a while. Glad to see you're posting again. I liked this story. I find it hard to find any fault with it at all really. Your characters ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: An Excerpt from Shrive

    You have unknowingly said magic words in the proper circumstances and have summoned me from the land of "My wrist doesn't want to kill me anymore, so I'll try to ...

    Dec 10, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Mrs. Marx surrenders- soul piece

    Hi there, kawriter. I'm Conrad. The first thing that I notice with this is that you do pretty good with description. This piece is very good with description and I ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Dream

    Hi there, Pacific_Sky14. I'm Conrad. So, when I stumbled upon this, I have to say that I found myself pleasantly surprised. I love how this poem tells a pretty interesting ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I should have done an English degree

    Hi there Eimear. I'm Conrad. So, I really kind of like this poem, mostly because I am finding myself in the same position as the speaker in university. As far ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hide

    Hi Sarah. I'm Conrad. So, this poem seems a bit muddled to me. What I would like to know, really, is who the speaker is referring to when they say, ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chained: edited

    Hi there Sarah. I'm Conrad. I have to say that the repetitive way you start your first seven lines or so doesn't do anything for me. It just kind of ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Vulnerable

    Hi there Kat Jackson. I'm Conrad. So, I feel really bad saying what I'm about to say. I've always said that a large part of poetry comes from the heart ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Elegy

    Hi lilchoma. I'm Conrad. So, an elegy is generally a generic name for a mournful poem. And, to be honest, this does seem rather generic. The first two stanzas don't ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Barbara Frietchie

    Hi there, MKate. I'm Conrad. So, while I'm not a fan of the original poem, I do have to say that I think your version remains rather faithful to it ...

    Nov 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Calling

    Hi there, AmyCx. I'm Conrad, and I've come to review. So, this is looking pretty good so far. I'm liking it. In fact, I'm really only seeing one fault with ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: James Cooper Markel

    Hi Quibbons. I'm Conrad. So, I'm having a hard time following your work. You try to have a good start, but you go start to use longer sentences without breaking ...

    Nov 23, 2009


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