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Re: The Water Elves ~ Chapter 1
Hi VulpixLover. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer. So, you seem like you are off to an all right start in terms of the over all story. In ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Life As A Two-Finned Freak *Still thinking of a better name*
Hi there Kayla. I'm Conrad Rice, and I'll be your reviewer. So, this has an interesting premise. I'll admit it has been done before, but don't let that stop you ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Cat Steps [1] DRAFT
So, finally, I work my way around to this. Sorry it took so long. So, you're off to a good start. As far as I'm concerned, I think that you're ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Parking as many cars as possible
Hi there! Been a while. Glad to see you're posting again. I liked this story. I find it hard to find any fault with it at all really. Your characters ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: An Excerpt from Shrive
You have unknowingly said magic words in the proper circumstances and have summoned me from the land of "My wrist doesn't want to kill me anymore, so I'll try to ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Mrs. Marx surrenders- soul piece
Hi there, kawriter. I'm Conrad. The first thing that I notice with this is that you do pretty good with description. This piece is very good with description and I ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Dream
Hi there, Pacific_Sky14. I'm Conrad. So, when I stumbled upon this, I have to say that I found myself pleasantly surprised. I love how this poem tells a pretty interesting ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: I should have done an English degree
Hi there Eimear. I'm Conrad. So, I really kind of like this poem, mostly because I am finding myself in the same position as the speaker in university. As far ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Hide
Hi Sarah. I'm Conrad. So, this poem seems a bit muddled to me. What I would like to know, really, is who the speaker is referring to when they say, ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Chained: edited
Hi there Sarah. I'm Conrad. I have to say that the repetitive way you start your first seven lines or so doesn't do anything for me. It just kind of ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Vulnerable
Hi there Kat Jackson. I'm Conrad. So, I feel really bad saying what I'm about to say. I've always said that a large part of poetry comes from the heart ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Elegy
Hi lilchoma. I'm Conrad. So, an elegy is generally a generic name for a mournful poem. And, to be honest, this does seem rather generic. The first two stanzas don't ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Barbara Frietchie
Hi there, MKate. I'm Conrad. So, while I'm not a fan of the original poem, I do have to say that I think your version remains rather faithful to it ...
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: The Calling
Hi there, AmyCx. I'm Conrad, and I've come to review. So, this is looking pretty good so far. I'm liking it. In fact, I'm really only seeing one fault with ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: James Cooper Markel
Hi Quibbons. I'm Conrad. So, I'm having a hard time following your work. You try to have a good start, but you go start to use longer sentences without breaking ...
Nov 23, 2009
